Thursday, 12 June 2014

Callum's Story (WHEN I LANDED ON PLANET ZARP)

It was May the 20th 2013 Ryan has just arrived back from Perth. Ryan and mates where playing on the rugby.When suddenly the sky turn a weird grey colour when Ryan turns round to run he looks back and spots his friends are missing for some  weird  reason he falls asleep ……

…He wakes up on this weird dark green plant with tall trees towering high above everything and quite strangely snow ton and tons of it.Just When Ryan was about  to take a step Zoom !!!!!!!  he was pulled under the snow by a  small mole creature as white as the snow with red eyes like the blood of a demon heart and it claws where as big as bumper carts and it smelt like hokey pokey ice cream.all of a sudden it let go of Ryan completely and he fall 10000 feet until  ………….

He hit the ground with a huge bang when he got up he brushed the snow off his green jumper and out of his black singlet that he wears under his green jumper  and black jeans that are tucked into his black boots.after brushing all the snow of he cloths he happen to look up and see all his friend locked up in capsule and there not talking or moving and there being turned into giant death worms but there are only 6 not 7 all in a flash nick appers 
in front of my face THIS THE END OF CHAPTER 1 SEE RYAN IN CHAPTER 2

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